Would you rather be a jack-of-all-trades or a master of one? What skill or skills would you like to
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I\'d like to be a master of one. Be cause I am a chef so I can live wherever i want with my skill and i was easy to settle down with my skill. To be hounsty, I am sick of cooking but i am really happy to have my professional skill. I\'d like to learn flower arrangement. I love flower so i always buy flower one a week. If i have a chance i\'d like to learn flower decoration as hobby..
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Hello Mari! It\'s nice to hear from you! Alright mate, thanks for sending your composition. ^_^
~T. Irene ~
I\'d like to be a master of one.
>>> Correct.
Because I am a chef so I can live wherever i want with my skill and i was easy to settle down with my skill.
>>> I am a chef and with my skill in cooking, it is easy to settle down wherever I want.
To be hounsty, I am sick of cooking but i am really happy to have my professional skill.
>>> To be honest, I sometimes feel so sick and tired of cooking but I do recognize it\'s usefulness as a profession.
I\'d like to learn flower arrangement.
>>> Now, I\'d like to learn about flower arrangement.
I love flower so i always buy flower one a week.
>>> I love flowers so I always buy flowers once a week.
If i have a chance i\'d like to learn flower decoration as hobby..
>>>If I could have the chance, I would like to learn about flower decorating as a hobby.
~T. Irene ~
I\'d like to be a master of one.
>>> Correct.
Because I am a chef so I can live wherever i want with my skill and i was easy to settle down with my skill.
>>> I am a chef and with my skill in cooking, it is easy to settle down wherever I want.
To be hounsty, I am sick of cooking but i am really happy to have my professional skill.
>>> To be honest, I sometimes feel so sick and tired of cooking but I do recognize it\'s usefulness as a profession.
I\'d like to learn flower arrangement.
>>> Now, I\'d like to learn about flower arrangement.
I love flower so i always buy flower one a week.
>>> I love flowers so I always buy flowers once a week.
If i have a chance i\'d like to learn flower decoration as hobby..
>>>If I could have the chance, I would like to learn about flower decorating as a hobby.
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