Would you rather be a unicorn or a dinosaur?Why?
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I would rather be a unicorn. The first reason is that If I can be unicorn I could fly in the sky. There are a few dinosaurs that can fly, I think a flying unicorn would be much more awesome and fantastic. Secondly, the unicorns are only fantasy creatures and they are so beautiful unlike dinosaurs so if I become a unicorn, I would be an only beautiful unicorn in the entire universe that is why I will be very loved from people all over the world.
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I would rather be a unicorn. The first reason is that If I can be
unicorn I could fly in the sky. There are a few dinosaurs that can fly, I
think a flying unicorn would be much more awesome and fantastic.
Secondly, the unicorns are only fantasy creatures and they are so
beautiful unlike dinosaurs so if I become a unicorn, I would be an only
beautiful unicorn in the entire universe that is why I will be very
loved from people all over the world.
>> I would rather be a unicorn. The first reason is that If I can be
a unicorn I could fly in the sky. There are a few dinosaurs that can fly, I
think a flying unicorn would be much more awesome and fantastic.
Secondly, the unicorns are only fantasy creatures and they are so
beautiful unlike dinosaurs so if I become a unicorn, I would be the only
beautiful unicorn in the entire universe that is why I will be loved from people all over the world.
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