Would you rather be big like an elephant or small like a mouse? Why?

2023-11-30 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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I would be small like a mouse because if I am big, I attract attention and I can hit people around whenever I move. If I am small, I can go anywhere regardless of transportation.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]! ^-^

Thank you for answering your homework. I actually agree with your logic.
Big figures attract more attention. Sometimes, it is better to be small and unnoticed to not cause any troubles.
I will see you in our next class. Have a good night!^^

__T. May[이름]n :)


I would be small like a mouse because if I am big, I attract attention and I can hit people around whenever I move.
>>> I will choose to be small, like a mouse, because if I am big, I can attract attention, and I can hit people around whenever I move.
If I am small, I can go anywhere regardless of transportation.
>>> If I am small, I can go anywhere, regardless of transportation.

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