Would you rather be genius or rich?
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I have preferred to be rich over genius. Because I can have various
opportunities and feel peace of mind for living.
>> I prefer to be rich
rather than to be a genius because when I am rich, I can have various opportunities and
peace of mind for living.
As an example, everyone
often faces their dream which is changeable over [이름]e.
>> As we can see,
everyone chases their own dream even when this changes as [이름]es goes on.
They can immediately change
their initiative right when it is determined.
>> They can
immediately change their strategies when they are determined.
If he is not rich, it
will be a obstacle to undergo himself even if he is genius.
>> If the person is
not rich then it will be so hard for him to do what he wants even when he is a genius.
Our society requires
process cost.
>> Our society
requires costs in everything we do.
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