Would you rather be poor but help people or become incredibly rich by hurting people?
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You are absolutely right! It\'s your personality that counts. We can\'t carry our wealth six feet under so let us not emphasize the use of money in our lives. Well done! See you tomorrow!
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I would rather be poor but help people.
>> I would rather be poor but help people out.
Even though money is necessity for living but it can’t be the weapon to earn it.
>> Correct!
The most important thing which we live better with is to understand people and help each other.
>> Correct
OR
>> The most important thing we could do in life is to understand people and help each other.
the way to happiness is very simpler than we think.
>> The road to happiness is very simple than we think.
it\'s not money but people who have nice attitudes even though they are poor.
>> It\'s not the money but the people who have nice attitudes even though they are poor.
OR
>> It\'s not the wealth of someone but the people who have positive attitudes even though they are poor that matter.
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