Would you rather be smart or beautiful / handsome?
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I want to be a beautiful women than smart.
It is because I know that beauty can not achieved through effort.
It just how we are born.
But I think I can be a smart person If I try hard.
So I crave to have an apperence more.
And actually I don\'t like lookism and I don\'t like people who judge by people looks.
However, when I look at this generation, appearence can make people rich, and even super star just by having beautiful face.
If I have a smart brain I can go to the best university and company. But I might be always study hard.
So I can get a reputation but I\'ll have a hard time.
For these reasons, I perfer a beauty more.
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>> I wan to be a beautiful woman than a smart one.
It is because I know that beauty can not achieved through effort.
It is because I know that beauty can not achieved through effort.
>> It is because I know I know that beauty cannot be achieved through effort.
It just how we are born.
It just how we are born.
>> It is just how we are born.
But I think I can be a smart person If I try hard.
But I think I can be a smart person If I try hard.
>> Correct.
So I crave to have an apperence more.
So I crave to have an apperence more.
>> So I crave to have a good appearance more.
And actually I don\'t like lookism and I don\'t like people who judge by people looks.
And actually I don\'t like lookism and I don\'t like people who judge by people looks.
>>And actually, I don\'t like being lookism and I don\'t like people who judge people\'s looks.
However, when I look at this generation, appearence can make people rich, and even super star just by having beautiful face.
However, when I look at this generation, appearence can make people rich, and even super star just by having beautiful face.
>> However, when I look at this generation, appearance can make people rich and even a superstar just by having a beautiful face.
If I have a smart brain I can go to the best university and company.
If I have a smart brain I can go to the best university and company.
>> Correct.
But I might be always study hard.
>> But I might always study hard.
So I can get a reputation but I\'ll have a hard time.
So I can get a reputation but I\'ll have a hard time.
>> Correct.
For these reasons, I perfer a beauty more.
For these reasons, I perfer a beauty more.
>> For these reasons, I prefer being more beautiful.
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