Would you rather buy a new cellphone or computer now?
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I would rather buy a computer now. Actually, I bought a new cellphone a few months ago. I like to buy apple production which is the iPhone and Macbook. I bought an iPhone last month. I don\'t have a Macbook right now. I am using the Samsung laptop these days. I will buy a Macbook next year. My father was promising to me. My father loves Apple too. But my brother loves Samsung rather than Apple. I don\'t even understand why he likes it. I think most of the people would rather Apple than Samsung. But Apple is more expensive than Samsung. What is your opinion? Would you rather Apple or Samsung?
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Hello there!
Thank you for sharing your ideas!
I would rather buy Apple but since my budget is too low I can\'t buy it.
Actually my phone now is Samsung and Huawei because it is cheap.
I hope you have a good and happy weekend~
I would rather buy a computer now.
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Actually, I bought a new cellphone a few months ago.
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I like to buy apple production which is the iPhone and Macbook.
>>I like to buy apple products like iPhone 0and Macbook.
I bought an iPhone last month.
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I don\'t have a Macbook right now.
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I am using the Samsung laptop these days.
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I will buy a Macbook next year.
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My father was promising to me.
>>My father promised me.
My father loves Apple too.
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But my brother loves Samsung rather than Apple.
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I don\'t even understand why he likes it.
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I think most of the people would rather Apple than Samsung.
>>I think most of the people would rather buy Apple products than Samsung.
But Apple is more expensive than Samsung.
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What is your opinion?
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Would you rather Apple or Samsung?
>>Would you rather buy Apple or Samsung?
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