Would you rather celebrate your birthday with just your relatives or just your friends? Why?
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I would rather celebrate my birthday with my friends.
I\'m close to my relatives but we have never had a birthday party because we all live far away.
I think it would be better for my relatives to receive only congratulatory messages and have a birthday party with my friends.
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I would rather celebrate my birthday with my friends.
>> CORRECT!
I\'m close to my relatives but we have never had a birthday party because we all live far away.
>> CORRECT!
I think it would be better for my relatives to receive only congratulatory messages and have a birthday party with my friends.
>> I think it would be better to receive congratulatory messages from my relatives and have a birthday party with my friends.
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