Would you rather drive your car or use public transportation? Why?
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I would use public trasnportaion.
Because I don\'t have a drive license.
I will get a drive license in winter vacation.
If I get a drive license, I want to buy my car and travel around.
It is one of my buket lists.
But, I have kept using public transportaiton because there is heavy traffic in Seoul.
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You are doing great :) Pay attention to your spelling while you write your compositions.
~ T. Demi ^^
I would use public trasnportaion.Because I don\'t have a drive license.
>> I would choose public transportation because I don\'t have a driver\'s license.
I will get a drive license in winter vacation.
>> I will be getting my driver\'s license during winter vacation.
If I get a drive license, I want to buy my car and travel around.
>> If I get it, I want to buy my car and travel around.
It is one of my buket lists.
>> It\'s one of my bucket lists.
But, I have kept using public transportaiton because there is heavy traffic in Seoul.
>> But I have to keep on using public transportation because of the heavy traffic in Seoul.
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