Would you rather eat a banana or a carrot? Why?
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I would rather eat a banana that is because a banana is much more delicious and sweeter than a carrot. I actually like cooked carrot but I don’ like uncooked one. It is so hard to chew and not sweet at all. But all kinds of bananas are sweet and they also have good nutritions. Besides a banana is so convenient to eat as snack anywhere.
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I would rather eat a banana that is because a banana is much more
delicious and sweeter than a carrot. I actually like cooked carrot but I
don’ like uncooked one. It is so hard to chew and not sweet at all. But
all kinds of bananas are sweet and they also have good nutritions.
Besides a banana is so convenient to eat as snack anywhere.
>> I would rather eat a banana that is because a banana is more
delicious and sweeter than a carrot. I actually like cooked carrot but I
don’ like uncooked one. It is so hard to chew and not sweet at all. But
all kinds of bananas are sweet and they also have good nutrition.
Besides a banana is so convenient to eat as snack anywhere.
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