Would you rather eat out or cook at home on special days?
학생이 쓴 원문
Would you rather eat out or cook at home on special days?
I can not cook well
I would like to rather eat out than cook at home on special days.
There are some good things.
I can talk a lot of times with family and have delicious special food made by shef.
As well as I can feel cozy whiling listen to music at a restaurant.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, Julia!
That\'s really convenient. My mother is not fond of eating out, because she knew that she is a good cook.
By the way, you did great sentences here, please check those small details that I corrected for your imporvement. thank you
Aki~
I can not cook well.
>>> CORRECT!
I would like to rather eat out than cook at home on special days.
I would like to rather eat out than cook at home on special days.
>>> CORRECT!
There are some good things.
There are some good things.
>>> CORRECT!
I can talk a lot of times with family and have delicious special food made by Shef.
I can talk a lot of times with family and have delicious special food made by Shef.
>>> I can talk a lot of times with my family and have delicious special food made by the chef.
As well as I can feel cozy whiling listen to music at a restaurant.
As well as I can feel cozy whiling listen to music at a restaurant.
>>> CORRECT!
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