Would you rather give money to beggars or buskers?
학생이 쓴 원문
I sometimes gave beggars money. But very rarely.
Most of the time I countered them, I have been usually ignored and passed by them with quick steps.
When I come across buskers I behave the same as well unless they play extraordinary music.
강사 첨삭
Hi Su ^^
I sometimes gave beggars money. But very rarely.
>>> I sometime give beggars money but very rarely.
Most of the time I countered them, I have been usually ignored and passed by them with quick steps.
>>> Most of the time I encounter them, I usually ignore and pass them by quickly.
When I come across buskers I behave the same as well unless they play extraordinary music.
>>> correct
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