Would you rather give money to beggars or buskers? (Buskers are people who entertain you on the stre

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Thanks for your ideas and for doing your essay.

I learned something from this.

Yes, you are right. They should know how to earn money than just by begging from someone.

I heard from someone that some beggars are actually rich.

What can you say about it? I was speechless when that person told me.

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I am not used to giving money to beggars or buskers.

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It is not because I have strong believe that the people should be financially independent without support from others and stand on his/her own feet.

>> Did you mean: It is not because I have a strong belief that the people should be financially independent without support from other and stand on his/her own feet.

>> It is not because I strongly believe that the people should be financially independent without support from other and stand on his/her own feet.

Some people often say that just simply giving money out of sympathy is not helpful for them at all, but it actually ruins them.

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>> Some people often say that just simply giving money out of sympathy won\'t help them at all, but it destroys the, 

They go on further saying that we need to teach them how to catch fish instead of just giving fish.

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I do not want to go further to discuss such a philosophical question.

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I just don’t feel comfortable about chipping in money in their basket.

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It seems that giving money to beggars or buskers need courage.

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As most Korean men typically are not used to expressing to their wives how much they love, even doing a right and good thing needs practice.

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>> Typically, most Korean men are not used to be expressive to their wives about how much they love them and even doing a good thing needs practice.

Without practicing, you might feel embarrassed and abashed even if you act in a desirable way.

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Sometimes, it is necessary for us to donate what we have to support the under-previleged without giving a second thought.

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