Would you rather give money to beggars or buskers? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think it’s okay give money to beggars or buskers.
because buskers receive money by showing their talents to people on the street. and I think it’s okay give money to beggars. because what he started begging on the street is he really very hard. so if I have ability I can help somebody, I help by giving money to beggars or buskers.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
With more people suffering from homelessness, the general public may feel they wish to give cash to those sleeping rough. But some people say that handing over money to beggars \"can have fatal consequences\".
In terms of buskers, these are entertainers. They are pretty much the same with other entertainers you see on television. If one has entertained you, you can definitely give them money if you can. They did something that can benefit you, which is to entertain you.
PS: Omg, you had a terrible experience. I feel so sorry to hear that :(
I think it’s okay give money to beggars or buskers.
>> CORRECT
because buskers receive money by showing their talents to people on the street.
>> It\'s because buskers receive money by showing their talents to the people on the street.
and I think it’s okay give money to beggars. because what he started begging on the street is he really very hard. \\
>> And I also think that giving money to beggars is okay because they in a very hard situation.
so if I have ability I can help somebody, I help by giving money to beggars or buskers.
>> So If I have the ability to help other people, I would do so by giving money to beggars or buskers.
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