Would you rather go into the past or the future to meet someone who you\'d like to see?

2022-09-07 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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if I could take the time machine for time travel, I would rather go into the past to improve my life by altering my bad decisions. And I could also advise my forefathers to make better decisions that influence their offspring including me. In this respect, my time travel to the past benefits more than the one to the future that may let me know the result of my hard-working efforts at the moment. But, for better or worse, my time travel to the past or the future may influence others around me as well. Therefore, if I shouldn\'t make an inevitable choice, I wouldn\'t select any of them. That\'s because I don\'t know how my choice to time travel will turn out with others and myself.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Steve! ^_^)

For decades, physicists have been studying and debating versions of this paradox: If we could travel back in time and change the past, what would happen to the future?

A new study offers a potential answer: Nothing.

Put simply: It\'s theoretically possible to go back in time, but you couldn\'t change history.

(source: businessinsider.com)

Enjoy the rest of the day!^^

__T. Mayleen :)

>>> If I could use the time machine for time travel, I would rather go into the past to improve my life by altering my bad decisions. And I could also advise my forefathers to make better decisions that influence their offspring, including me.

In this respect, my time travel to the past benefits more than the one to the future that may let me know the result of my hard-working efforts at the moment.

>>> In this respect, my time travel to the past benefits more than the one to the future, which may let me know the result of my hard-working efforts at the moment.
But, for better or worse, my time travel to the past or the future may influence others around me as well.

>>> CORRECT

>>> OR: But my ability to go to the past or the future can also have an impact on those who are close to me.

Therefore, if I shouldn\'t make an inevitable choice, I wouldn\'t select any of them. That\'s because I don\'t know how my choice to time travel will turn out with others and myself.

>>> Therefore, if I shouldn\'t make an inevitable choice, I wouldn\'t select any of them. That\'s because I don\'t know how my decision to time travel will turn out for others and myself.

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