Would you rather go to someone else\'s house for a party or have it at yours? Why?

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Here are my corrections for you:

I prefer host party in my house rather then other house.

>> I prefer hosting a party in my house rather than going to someone else\'s house.
I like giving to someone, and when I go to someone else\'s house, hmm I am burden

>> I like giving and when I go to someone else\'s house, I might be a burden.