Would you rather go to someone else\'s house for a party or have it at yours? Why?
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Hi Su ^^
I like to visit other people\'s house.
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In the case of party, it is perfect.
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I\'m also fond of inviting old friends to my house and having great time with them.
>>> I\'m also fond of inviting old friends at my house while having a great time with them.
Making and serving foods of my close friends make me happy.
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But in this days, I prefer visiting my friends home when I compare it with inviting someone.
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Honestly, organizing personal place and planning parties are a kind of burden when I can not afford to do it.
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Recently, I don\'t have enough time and breadth of mind.
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So I would like to visit my friends simply now.
>>> So I would rather visit my friends now a days.
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