Would you rather go to the beach or go camping?
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I would rather go to camping because If I go to camping, I don’t have to go into water and I don’t have to get sunlight that much. I know getting sunlight a lot is not good for skin. When I get a lot of sunlight my skin could be burn and dark. I don’t really want it. Actually I haven’t been to camping but I I have been to beach a few time. However, I look forward to go to camping with my family someday.
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Hi [이름]!
See you later ^^
T. DON
>> I would rather go camping because If I go to camping, I don’t
have to go into water and I don’t have to get sunlight that much. I know
getting sunlight a lot is not good for skin. When I get a lot of
sunlight my skin could be burned and get dark. I don’t really want it.
Actually I haven’t been to camping but I have been to a beach a few
times. However, I look forward to go camping with my family someday.
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