Would you rather go to the beach or the pamping?
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I think I llike both .
Beacause I did\'t go camping.
And Beacause Mom and Dad dislike camping.
And camping\'s weaknees is there is a bee.
And beach\'s weaknees is too many sands.
These are my both like thinks.
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Beacause I did\'t go camping.
And Beacause Mom and Dad dislike camping.
And camping\'s weaknees is there is a bee.
And beach\'s weaknees is too many sands.
These are my both like thinks.
>> I think I would like both because I haven\'t experienced camping. My mom and my dad doesn\'t allow me to go camping yet. The disadvantage of camping is there are many bees or insects when you go camping. The beach has too much sand. I like them both.
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