Would you rather grow wings to fly or gills to breathe underwater
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I would rather grow wings to fly. It is because I’m good at swimming and I can go underwater so I can feel I’m swimming like fish or something. However, flying in the sky by my self without plane is completely impossible. If I grow wings I want to fly in the sky like birds and I want to feel I’m really flying. Besides I could be more amazing than a Spider-Man or Iron man.
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Great answers once again! See you ^^
T. DON
I would rather grow wings to fly. It is because I’m good at swimming and
I can go underwater so I can feel I’m swimming like fish or something.
However, flying in the sky by my self without plane is completely
impossible. If I grow wings I want to fly in the sky like birds and I
want to feel I’m really flying. Besides I could be more amazing than a
Spider-Man or Iron man.
>> I would rather grow wings to fly. It is because I’m good at swimming and
I can go underwater so I can feel I’m swimming like a fish or something.
However, flying in the sky by myself without plane is completely
impossible. If I grow wings I want to fly in the sky like the birds and I
want to feel that I’m really flying. Besides I could be more amazing than
Spider-Man or Iron man.
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