Would you rather have a golden voice or a silver tongue?

2017-09-18 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

학생이 쓴 원문

I would rather have a silver tongue. I have got a real hang-up about speaking my thought to people. When I was young, I always wanted to be good at everything. Especially, I was jealous scene-stealers who spoke fluently and smart. Even though I grew up, I can’t overcome my inferiority having been getting better talking to people with my logic though. So I analyzed my personality that still makes me depressed. It is that I’m specialized to compare me with someone who is in glory days. It will be very hard to be a getting better. But from now on, I will try to know myself, what I want to be by listening to inside of me and specialized myself.

강사 첨삭

Good day [이름]!

You just gave bright lights to this topic. Being able to express your own thoughts to people is a winner.

See you!

~T. Eunice


I would rather have a silver tongue.
>> Correct!
I have got a real hang-up about speaking my thought to people.
>> I have gotten a real hang-up about speaking my thoughts to people.
When I was young, I always wanted to be good at everything.
>> Correct!
Especially, I was jealous scene-stealers who spoke fluently and smart.
>> Especially, I was jealous to scene-stealers who spoke fluently and smart.
Even though I grew up, I can’t overcome my inferiority having been getting better talking to people with my logic though.
>> Even though I\'m an adult, I can’t overcome my inferiority but I have been getting better talking to people with my logic though.
So I analyzed my personality that still makes me depressed.
>> So I analyzed my personality that still making me depressed.
It is that I’m specialized to compare me with someone who is in glory days.
>> It is that I have the tendency to compare myself with someone who was in his glory days.
It will be very hard to be a getting better.
>> It would be very hard to get better.
But from now on, I will try to know myself, what I want to be by listening to inside of me and specialized myself.
>> But from now on, I will try to know myself even better,  what I want to be and by listening to my inner self.

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