Would you rather have a high IQ or high EQ?
학생이 쓴 원문
I would rather have a high EQ because I think relationships are important than how much I am smart. If I have high EQ, I would be good at caring people near me so that I can be much more friendlier and helpful friend who is emphatic. Also In some movies, characters who tried to be sympathetic to villains instead of smart character who tries to kill villains with poison, had solved problems better. So that is why I want high EQ
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this [이름]. I agree with you, because in this social life, there are more times when we need to create harmony with other people than times we should be smart.
I would rather have a high EQ because I think relationships are important than how much I am smart.
>>> I would rather have a high EQ because I think relationships are more important than how smart I am.
>>> OR: I would rather have a high EQ because I think relationships are more important than being smart.
If I have high EQ, I would be good at caring people near me so that I can be much more friendlier and helpful friend who is emphatic.
>>> If I have a high EQ, I would be good at caring for people near me so that I can be much friendlier and be a helpful friend who is empathic.
Also In some movies, characters who tried to be sympathetic to villains instead of smart character who tries to kill villains with poison, had solved problems better.
>>> Also, in some movies, characters who tried to be sympathetic towards villains instead of being the smart character who tries to kill the villains with a poison, had solved problems better.
So that is why I want high EQ.
>>> correct
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