Would you rather have a stressful, high-paying job or a relaxed, low-paying job?
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I rather have a relaxed, low-paying job if the money is enough to keep my life on. I don\'t think it\'s necessary to earn much money. But I think stressful work will make me depressed and unhappy. Of course, my decision can be changed depending on situations but for now, I matter comfortable mind than money.
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I rather have a relaxed, low-paying job if the money is enough to keep my life on.
>> Correct!
OR: I\'d rather have a relaxed, low-paying job if the money is sufficient to sustain my life.
I don\'t think it\'s necessary to earn much money. But I think stressful work will make me depressed and unhappy.
>> Correct!
OR: I do not believe it is necessary to earn a lot of money. However, I believe that stress at work will lead to depression and unhappiness.
Of course, my decision can be changed depending on situations but for now, I matter comfortable mind than money.
>> Correct!
OR: Of course, my decision may change depending on the circumstances, but for the time being, I prioritize mental comfort over financial gain.
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