Would you rather have more time or more money?
학생이 쓴 원문
I would like having more time rather than money. There are 24 hours in a day, but I sometimes feel the time has passed fast and time is so precious. Therefore I want to have more time. Actually If I have more time, I can get more money through my work.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Betty~
As an employee, working longer hours may be necessary in order to earn more money. However, it can be challenging to balance work and personal time. As I get older, I am eager to earn more money to save, but I also want to prioritize enjoying the present moment.~
Chammy
I would like having more time rather than money.
>> I would like to have more time rather than money.
There are 24 hours in a day, but I sometimes feel the time has passed fast and time is so precious.
OR
>>There are 24 hours in a day, but sometimes I feel that time passes quickly and it is so precious.
OR
>>Even though there are twenty-four hours in a day, there are moments when I feel like time is flying fast which makes time even more precious.
Therefore I want to have more time. Actually, If I have more time, I can get more money through my work.
OR
>>I therefore desire more time. Actually, I can work for more money if I have more time.
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