Would you rather have the perfect body or be super intelligent?
학생이 쓴 원문
I would rather be super intelligent.
I want to earn money a lot.
And I want to earn money easily.
So I chose super intelligent.
If I have to earn money with the perfect body, my body will be broken in health.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름] Hu!
What a wise answer! Thanks for accomplishing today\'s homework. See you tomorrow! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
>>CORRECT!
I want to earn money a lot.
I want to earn money a lot.
>>CORRECT!
>>or: I want to earn a lot of money.
And I want to earn money easily.
And I want to earn money easily.
>>CORRECT!
So I chose super intelligent.
So I chose super intelligent.
>>So I chose to be super intelligent.
If I have to earn money with the perfect body, my body will be broken in health.
If I have to earn money with the perfect body, my body will be broken in health.
>>If I have to earn money with the perfect body, my health would suffer.
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