Would you rather live alone or with other people? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
it depends on the people who live in with.
if the people is my family, then yes
if the people is my friends, no...
if the person is my lover, well i don\'t know yet.
but it is certain that now, i want to live alone in my private space and have my own time concentrating on myself.
but, in the end of the road i want to live with my family whom i love, and spend rest of my time with them. that is the most valuable thing in my life.
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it depends on the people who live in with.
>> It depends on the people who I live in with.
if the people is my family, then yes
>> If the people are my family, then yes.
if the people is my friends, no...
>> If the people are my friends, then no.
if the person is my lover, well i don\'t know yet.
>> If the person is my lover, well I don\'t know about it yet.
but it is certain that now, i want to live alone in my private space and have my own time concentrating on myself.
>> It is certain that for now, I want to live alone in my private space and have my own time concentrating on myself.
but, in the end of the road i want to live with my family whom i love, and spend rest of my time with them. that is the most valuable thing in my life.
>> But also, at the end of the road I want to live with my family whom I love the most and spend the rest of my time with them. They are the most valuable thing in my life.
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