Would you rather live an in a village or a rural center? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to live in the village because village people is more kind than rural center people.
So I want to live in village.
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Would you rather live an in a village or a rural center? Why?
I want to live in the village because village people is more kind than rural center people.
So I want to live in village.
>>> I want to live in the village because the people there are kinder than those in the town center.
>>> OR: I prefer living in a village because the people are kinder than those in urban areas.
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