would you rather live in an apartment or a house ?

2020-09-15 · 첨삭 강사 Irene

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1990 I was teenages, I lived in the house in small town . At that time ,I enjoyed the good time,so have a happy memory. Sometimes, I used to look back of my childhood. I have lived in anapartment since 1990 Living in the apartment is very convenient, can make good communicate with neiborhood. In my opinion, As I get older I need to live in the apartment, because of transportation,hospital,other better culture . So I like living in an apartment.

강사 첨삭

Good evening Ma\'am. I appreciate your honest answer for this question. ^_^

T. Irene

1990 I was teenages, I lived in the house in small town .

>>> Around 1990, I was a teenager and I lived in a house in a small town.
At that time ,I enjoyed the good time,so have a happy memory.

>>> At that time, I had a good time and so many happy memories.
Sometimes, I used to look back of my childhood.
>>> Sometimes, I look back at my childhood.
I have lived in an apartment since 1990.

>>> Correct.
Living in the apartment is very convenient, can make good communicate with neiborhood.
>>> Living in the apartment is very convenient because I can communicate well with my neighbors.
In my opinion, As I get older I need to live in the apartment, because of transportation,hospital,other better culture .

>>> In my opinion, as I get older, it is better to live in an apartment because of the conveniences of transportation, hospitals and other better facilities nearby.

So I like living in an apartment.

>>> Correct.

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