Would you rather live in Russia, the US, Canada, Australia, Brazil, or China? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
If I have enough money, I think Korea is best place to live. I don\'t want to live out of Korea.
But, I would like to travel Russia, the US, Canada, Australia, Brazil, or Chine because there are many beautiful places to travel.
and I would like to meet other countries\' people to know diversity.
강사 첨삭
A cold and rainy afternoon Mr. [이름]^^
I agree that there are stunning places to visit in these countries. I hope that I could be in these countries someday.
Thank you for your response Mr. [이름].
Talk to you later^^
Would you rather live in Russia, the US, Canada, Australia, Brazil, or China? Why?
If I have enough money, I think Korea is best place to live.
>>CORRECT!
I don\'t want to live out of Korea.
>>I don\'t want to leave Korea.
But, I would like to travel Russia, the US, Canada, Australia, Brazil, or Chine because there are many beautiful places to travel.
>>But I want to travel Russia, the United States, Canada, Australia, Brazil, or China. Because there are many beautiful places in these countries.
and I would like to meet other countries\' people to know diversity.
>>And I want to meet people from other countries to know diversity.
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