Would you rather make more money but be busier or make less money but be less busy?
학생이 쓴 원문
I’ll choose to earn more money but be busier than to earn less money but be less busy because money makes life abundant.
With money, we can buy our time. So there’s nothing to worry about. However, spending time without money is ideal and unrealistic. The world where we living in is made up of a rule of con[이름]ng.
강사 첨삭
This is a really cool idea. Thank you for giving me this idea. ^_^
I’ll choose to earn more money but be busier than to earn less money but be less busy because money makes life abundant.
>> Correct.
With money, we can buy our time.
>> With money, we can buy time.
So there’s nothing to worry about.
>> Correct.
However, spending time without money is ideal and unrealistic.
>> Correct.
The world where we living in is made up of a rule of con[이름]ng.
>> The world where we are living in is made up of a rule of con[이름]ng.
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