Would you rather marry someone plain with a good personality or someone beautiful without much perso
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People have a different preference to their mates. Some people want to marry someone who is not handsome or beautiful but has a nice characteristic. Others may consider someone who has attractive appearance without much personality. In my point of view, I want to marry someone plain with a good personality.
I think that beautiful or handsome look cannot be everlasting. Even though there are many technology to keep our appearance look more beautiful, it has limitation. We cannot live with charming face forever. If someone has just beautiful face without a good personality, others will be sick and tired of him or her bad attitude. However, when it comes to a good personality, it can be everlasting because it is intrinsic one. In addition, a good characteristic makes the person look more attractive and charming.
Of course, the more handsome appearance my mate has, the more happy I am. But good personality is more important to me, so I want to marry someone with good characteristic.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Miss [이름]!
Thank you for sharing about the qualities of your ideal partner. I agree with you that having a good personality lasts forever. Anyway, stay in love.^^ Take care and see you again.
~Kelly^^
People have a different preference to their mates.
>> People have a different preferences about their ideal man or woman.
Some people want to marry someone who is not handsome or beautiful but has a nice characteristic.
>> Correct.
Others may consider someone who has attractive appearance without much personality.
>> Others may consider someone who has an attractive appearance without a good personality.
In my point of view, I want to marry someone plain with a good personality.
>> Correct.I think that beautiful or handsome look cannot be everlasting.
>> I think that a beautiful or handsome face cannot be everlasting.
Even though there are many technology to keep our appearance look more beautiful, it has limitation.
>> Even though there are many forms technology to keep our appearance look more beautiful, they have limitations.
We cannot live with charming face forever.
>> We cannot live with a charming face forever.
If someone has just beautiful face without a good personality, others will be sick and tired of him or her bad attitude.
>> If someone has a beautiful face but without a good personality, others will be sick and tired of his bad attitude.
However, when it comes to a good personality, it can be everlasting because it is intrinsic one.
>> However, when it comes to having a good personality, it can be everlasting because it is intrinsic.
In addition, a good characteristic makes the person look more attractive and charming.
>> In addition, a good characteristic makes a person look more attractive and charming. Of course, the more handsome appearance my mate has, the more happy I am.
>> Correct.
But good personality is more important to me, so I want to marry someone with good characteristic.
>> But a good personality is more important to me, so I want to marry someone with good characteristics.
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