Would you rather play video games or read books all day?
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Maybe I rather reading book.
Because I sometimes go to the school library.
In the library I borrow 2 books maybe.
But I play vibeo games freqently.
These are I rather read books.
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T. DON
Because I sometimes go to the school library.
In the library I borrow 2 books maybe.
But I play vibeo games freqently.
These are I rather read books.
>> Maybe I\'d rather read a book because I sometimes go to the school library. In the library, I borrow 2 books. I only play video games frequently. I\'d rather read books all day.
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