Would you rather play video games or read books all day?ᩚ
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If I have to choose only one, I would rather read books all day beacause I think it is boring playing video games ‘all day long’ and it is going to hurt my eyes. I actually have only two games Minecraft and Roblox on my computer. There are many contents but not very something fun. I enjoy playing video game briefly for my break time but it feels like it will be kind of hard playing all day. However, I have many books different kinds of story and genre so l feel I could read books all day long.
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T. DON
If I have to choose only one, I would rather read books all day beacause
I think it is boring playing video games ‘all day long’ and it is going
to hurt my eyes. I actually have only two games Minecraft and Roblox on
my computer. There are many contents but not very something fun. I
enjoy playing video game briefly for my break time but it feels like it
will be kind of hard playing all day. However, I have many books
different kinds of story and genre so l feel I could read books all day
long.
>> If I have to choose only one, I would rather read books all day because
I think it is boring playing video games ‘all day long’ and it is going
to hurt my eyes. I actually have only two games Minecraft and Roblox on
my computer. There are many contents but not very fun. I
enjoy playing a video game briefly for my break time but it feels like it
will be kind of hard playing all day. However, I have many books with different kinds of stories and genre so l feel I could read books all day
long.
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