Would you rather ride a bicycle or go roller skating?
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I would rather ride a bicycle but l haven’t ridden two wheeled bicycle and roller skating. Actually I usually ride skateboard. I only ride skate board since I start to practice it when I was eight. I think riding skateboard looks so cool and it is not that common and I really enjoy it. However I’d like to try riding a bicycle someday.
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>> I would rather ride a bicycle but l haven’t ridden a two wheel bicycle and roller skating. Actually I usually ride a skateboard. I only
ride a skateboard since I startrf to practice it when I was eight. I think
riding a skateboard looks so cool and it is not that common and I really
enjoy it. However I’d like to try riding a bicycle someday.
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