Would you rather sleep late every day or get up early every morning?
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I would rather get up early. First of all, sleeping late is not good for my growth. My dream hight is 187centimeter so I couldn’t grow well when I do not sleep early. Secondly, I will be able to start a day so early and happily when I wake up early every morning. Besides, I’ve heard that when we wake up early, a lot of dopamines come out of our body and it makes us very exciting, active and happy.
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>> I would rather get up early. First of all, sleeping late is not good
for my growth. My dream height is 187centimeter so I couldn’t grow well
when I do not sleep early. Secondly, I will be able to start a day so
early and happily when I wake up early every morning. Besides, I’ve
heard that when we wake up early, a lot of dopamine come out of our
body and it makes us very exciting, active and happy.
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