Would you rather speak all languages or be able to speak to all animals?
학생이 쓴 원문
I not a guy who love raising animals at home. I haven\'t had close relationship with animals. I haven\'t thought of communicating with them because I have allergy from animal hair and I don\'t think I can care for them well. I had difficulties when my children were young. I think raising animal need similar energy as we put the efforts to children. Whereas, there will be a lot of chances if I can speak many languages well such as getting a job, immigration and having friends around the world. I feel excited when I think of meeting new friends. However, It takes a lot of time to learn languages. All people know that if we use and study it, we can speak any languages fluently. Koreans have to select one of the languages as a essential subject at the high school and need to study expect English until graduation. It means that we study 3 languages while we are in the school. However, Most people don\'t speak foreign languages after graduation of high school.It is the issue we need to solve
강사 첨삭
Hello, Mr. [이름]! Thanks for your opinion about this. I also do think that speaking human languages would be more useful to us.
However, I would also like to talk to animals so I can ask my dog what he\'s thinking. ^^ Have a good morning, Sir. See you later! ^_^
~T.Avery
I not a guy who love raising animals at home.
>> I\'m not a guy who loves raising animals at home.
I haven\'t had close relationship with animals.
>> I haven\'t had a close relationship with animals.
I haven\'t thought of communicating with them because I have allergy from animal hair and I don\'t think I can care for them well.
>> CORRECT
I had difficulties when my children were young.
>> CORRECT
I think raising animal need similar energy as we put the efforts to children.
>> I think raising animals need similar energy as the efforts we put to children.
OR>> Raising animals requires the same amount of efforts as raising children.
Whereas, there will be a lot of chances if I can speak many languages well such as getting a job, immigration and having friends around the world.
>> CORRECT
I feel excited when I think of meeting new friends.
>> CORRECT
However, It takes a lot of time to learn languages.
>> CORRECT
All people know that if we use and study it, we can speak any languages fluently.
>> CORRECT
Koreans have to select one of the languages as a essential subject at the high school and need to study expect English until graduation.
>> Koreans have to select one of the languages, except English, as an essential subject in high school and they need to study it until graduation.
It means that we study 3 languages while we are in the school.
>> CORRECT
However, Most people don\'t speak foreign languages after graduation of high school.
>> However, most people don\'t speak foreign languages after graduating from high school.
It is the issue we need to solve
>> CORRECT
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