Would you rather spend a weekend with your friends or your family?

2016-04-01 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

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In my case, I usually spend my Saturday with my friends. Because on the weekdays my friends and I are busy. So We can't meet on that days. Almost friends can make their time for meeting on Saturday. By this reason, I meet my friends on Saturday. On Sunday, I usually spend my time alone or with my family. To work next week, I should keep my energy on Sunday. If I had meetings on both Saturday and Sunday, I would have felt so tired and exausted from Monday. Also I like watching movies and reading my favorite books. For these my hobbies, I try to make my Sunday off-day, deliberately.

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Hello [이름] Mi! Happy people make best use of their time - more so on weekends, certainly the most favorite time for everyone. While some people allow the weekends to just drift by doing nothing, happy and successful people plan the days around major events with time to spare for some \"me\" time. Sheila Viesca, TalkShop CEO says, “A happy weekend leaves one feeling recharged, to get ready for Monday. One who is able to utilize the weekend productively feels happier and therefore more productive for the week ahead.\" So, I can say that you spend your weekends right. Anyway, I will catch you again later. -Teacher Chloe In my case, I usually spend my Saturday with my friends. >>Correct! OR:>>In my case, I usually spend Saturdays with friends. Because on the weekdays my friends and I are busy. >>My friends and I are busy on weekdays. So We can\'t meet on that days. >>We can\'t usually meet on weekdays. Almost friends can make their time for meeting on Saturday. >>Almost all my friends have the time for meeting on Saturdays.By this reason, I meet my friends on Saturday.>>So, we usually meet on Saturdays.On Sunday, I usually spend my time alone or with my family. >>Correct! To work next week, I should keep my energy on Sunday. >>I usually re-energize on Sundays for the next weekday. If I had meetings on both Saturday and Sunday, I would have felt so tired and exausted from Monday. >>When I have meetings on both Saturday and Sunday, I would feel so tired and exhausted on Monday. Also I like watching movies and reading my favorite books. >>Also, I like watching movies and reading my favorite books. (There should be a (,) after \"also\".)For these my hobbies, I try to make my Sunday off-day, deliberately. >>I usually do my hobbies on Sundays.

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