Would you rather stay in a luxury hotel for a short time or a budget place for a longer stay?
학생이 쓴 원문
I\'m surprised that I read this question.
The reason is that I always consider between these two types.
But, I used to choose longer staty in budget place.
I think making memories is more important so I want to have some activities with my family.
This summer vacation case is same.
There are some travel trains near this accomodation and we can see the view \'Song-joeng beach\' in this place.
I believe and hope the vacation will be good to me and my family.
강사 첨삭
Hi Stella,
I’m so happy to read your essay again. Thank you for taking the time to answer this.~^^
I think this question is a dilemma for all travelers. Like you, I also ended up choosing a longer stay in an affordable place.
I truly believe this vacation will be wonderful for you and your family, and I’m excited to hear your stories soon.
I think this question is a dilemma for all travelers. Like you, I also ended up choosing a longer stay in an affordable place.
I truly believe this vacation will be wonderful for you and your family, and I’m excited to hear your stories soon.
See you tomorrow!~^^
- Teacher Elly~
I\'m surprised that I read this question.
The reason is that I always consider between these two types.
>> The reason is that I’m always deciding between these two types.
- Teacher Elly~
I\'m surprised that I read this question.
>> CORRECT (grammatically correct)
OR >> I’m surprised by this question.
OR >> I’m surprised by this question.
OR >> This question really surprised me.
The reason is that I always consider between these two types.
>> The reason is that I’m always deciding between these two types.
OR >> The reason is that I often have to choose between these two types.
But, I used to choose longer staty in budget place.
>> But I used to choose a longer stay in a budget place.
>> But I used to choose a longer stay in a budget place.
OR >> But I preferred longer stays in budget accommodations.
I think making memories is more important so I want to have some activities with my family.
>> CORRECT (grammatically correct)
OR >> I believe making memories is more important, so I want to spend time doing activities with my family.
>> CORRECT (grammatically correct)
OR >> I believe making memories is more important, so I want to spend time doing activities with my family.
This summer vacation case is same.
>> This summer vacation is the same.
>> This summer vacation is the same.
OR >> It’s the same case for this summer vacation.
There are some travel trains near this accomodation and we can see the view \'Song-joeng beach\' in this place.
>> There are some tourist trains near this accommodation, and we can see Songjeong Beach from there.
>> There are some tourist trains near this accommodation, and we can see Songjeong Beach from there.
OR >> Near this accommodation, there are tourist trains, and you can see the view of Songjeong Beach.
I believe and hope the vacation will be good to me and my family.
>> CORRECT (grammatically correct)
>> CORRECT (grammatically correct)
OR >> I believe and hope the vacation will be good for me and my family.
OR >> I’m hopeful this vacation will be wonderful for my family and me.
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