Would you rather take a trip to go a new country or get a new tv? And why?

2020-04-20 · 첨삭 강사 Tricia

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Hi Tricia, I want to buy a new TV. Because of COVID 19, I can not go to trip now and after trip, it remain only pictures. But we can use TV during 10 years almost. TV is cheaper than the trip. If give up abroad trip, It maybe buy a 65inch TV.

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Hello [이름]! :)

Thank you so much for answering your homework.

Have a wonderful day. :)

- Tricia

I want to buy a new TV.

>> CORRECT!

Because of COVID 19, I can not go to trip now and after trip, it remain only pictures.

>> Because of COVID-19, I cannot go on a trip now and after a trip, the memories and scenic views only remain as pictures.

But we can use TV during 10 years almost.

>> But we can use a TV for 10 years or more.

TV is cheaper than the trip.

>> Buying a TV is cheaper than going on a trip.

If give up abroad trip, It maybe buy a 65inch TV.

>> If you can\'t travel abroad, might as well just buy a 65 inch TV.

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