Would you rather take an afternoon nap or spend all afternoon playing outside?Why?
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I would rather spend all afternoon playing outside. It is because I sleep enough every night so l don’t have to take a nap at all and I think it is waste of time. Playing outside all afternoon has more benefits. It makes me very healthy, less play video games and more sleep well at night to grow up well. In fact I was hoping to play outside all day long.
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I would rather spend all afternoon playing outside. It is because I sleep enough every night so l don’t have to take a nap at all and I think it is waste of time. Playing outside all afternoon has more benefits. It makes me very healthy, less play video games and more sleep well at night to grow up well. In fact I was hoping to play outside all day long.
>> I would rather spend all afternoon playing outside. It is because I
sleep enough every night so l don’t have to take a nap at all and I
think it is a waste of time. Playing outside all afternoon has more
benefits. It makes me very healthy, less play video games and more sleep
well at night to grow up well. In fact I was hoping to play outside all
day long.
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