Would you rather visit every country or fly to outer space?
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I would rather fly to outer space. It is because I think that exploration universe would be a lot more exciting. Besides, my bucket list is to see a real universe and especially Pluto from away. Lastly, I want to take a spaceship and eat some food in it. I’ve heard that eating food in outer space feels like to be very delicious.
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I would rather fly to outer space. It is because I think that
exploration universe would be a lot more exciting. Besides, my bucket
list is to see a real universe and especially Pluto from away. Lastly, I
want to take a spaceship and eat some food in it. I’ve heard that
eating food in outer space feels like to be very delicious.
>> I would rather fly to outer space. It is because I think that
exploring the universe would be a lot more exciting. Besides, my bucket
list is to see the universe and especially the planet Pluto which is the farthest planet. Lastly, I
want to ride on a spaceship and eat some food on it. I’ve heard that
eating food in outer space taste more delicious.
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