Would you rather work for a male or female boss?

2016-04-20 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I have never experienced working with a female boss so far. And I might have prejudice against a female boss because I don’t feel comfortable working for her. I was raised up and influenced by Confucianism in which gender roles are distinctive and clearly divided. Men should work outside, make money, and support their families. While women should stay at home, taking care of housework and raising children. Although the world has changed a lot from the past especially in Asian countries when it comes to the gender roles, many male workers still have a hard time working with their female bosses. Korea is the country where a female president is heading the nation, which was once believed to be unimaginable, however, most of male workers’ mindset and sentiment are still old-fashioned and behind the times. We rationally understand that our society has changed and need to adapt ourselves to the new working environment, but we still feel awkward working for a female boss. We need to change.

강사 첨삭

Hi Sir [이름]!

Good afternoon.

Thank you so much for your time.

I am so happy that I received a composition from you.

I learned something from it.

Have a good day.
Teacher Nina


I have never experienced working with a female boss so far.

>> correct

And I might have prejudice against a female boss because I don’t feel comfortable working for her.

>> correct

I was raised up and influenced by Confucianism in which gender roles are distinctive and clearly divided.

>> correct

Men should work outside, make money, and support their families.

>> correct

While women should stay at home, taking care of housework and raising children.

>> correct

Although the world has changed a lot from the past especially in Asian countries when it comes to the gender roles, many male workers still have a hard time working with their female bosses.

>> correct

Korea is the country where a female president is heading the nation, which was once believed to be unimaginable, however, most of male workers’ mindset and sentiment are still old-fashioned and behind the times.

>> correct

We rationally understand that our society has changed and need to adapt ourselves to the new working environment, but we still feel awkward working for a female boss.

>> correct

We need to change.

>> correct

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