Would you rather work for a male or female boss?
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I have never experienced working with a female boss so far.
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And I might have prejudice against a female boss because I don’t feel comfortable working for her.
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I was raised up and influenced by Confucianism in which gender roles are distinctive and clearly divided.
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Men should work outside, make money, and support their families.
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While women should stay at home, taking care of housework and raising children.
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Although the world has changed a lot from the past especially in Asian countries when it comes to the gender roles, many male workers still have a hard time working with their female bosses.
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Korea is the country where a female president is heading the nation, which was once believed to be unimaginable, however, most of male workers’ mindset and sentiment are still old-fashioned and behind the times.
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We rationally understand that our society has changed and need to adapt ourselves to the new working environment, but we still feel awkward working for a female boss.
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We need to change.
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