Would you recommend that a friend take a cruise? Why or why not?
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Hey there, [이름]!
That was an interesting answer. I also wanted to take a cruise someday!
-Kristine ^^
Yes, I would recommend that a friend take a cruise.
>> Yes, I would recommend taking a cruise to my friends.
Because you can see the beautiful scenery by taking a cruise.
>> Because when you take a cruise, you can see beautiful scenery.
Especially in Korea, taking a cruise in Han River
is really famous and popular for many visitors.
>> Correct.
You can enjoy night view in the cruise.
>> You can enjoy the night view on a cruise.
And also, It is possible to overlook the whole
Seoul city with amazing landscape.
>> Also, you can see amazing landscapes overlooking in Seoul
city.
While taking the cruise, people can also enjoy
delicious food with alchols.
>> People can also enjoy delicious foods and alcohol while
taking the cruise.
So that’s why I highly recommend my friend to take
a cruise.
>> So that’s why I highly recommend my friends to take a cruise.
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