Would you risk your life to save a friend? How about a stranger?
학생이 쓴 원문
I wouldn\'t risk my life for friend. I know that they are important people for me, but capital society teaches that friends are also the rival. So, I think that they are just a rival. If I have to choose between success and friend, I will choose success.
강사 첨삭
Here\'s your edited homework, [이름]!
Just a reminder, avoid repeating the same word in a single sentence as much as possible. Look for synonyms or substitute like the way I taught you today. Check the corrections carefully and you will know how to do it.^^
Cheers,
Jean~~
I wouldn\'t risk my life for friend.
>> I wouldn\'t risk my life for friend.
I know that they are important people for me, but capital society teaches that friends are also the rival.
>> I know that they are important people for me, but the capitalist society teaches us that friends are also our rivals.
So, I think that they are just a rival.
>> So, I think that they are just rivals.
If I have to choose between success and friend, I will choose success.
>> If I have to choose between success and a friend, I will choose the former.
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