Would you sacrifice a big amount of money to pay for travelling to other countries?
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Hi there Sir [이름]!
Thank you so much for your composition.
I am so happy that you spent some time to send this in today.
I hope that you will be able to visit a lot of countries.
Traveling costs a lot of money.
We can avail tour packages in which we will be with other people. however, there are some disadvantages of it.
We might not enjoy looking at the scenery because the itinerary schedule is tight.
I guess it is still better to travel with our family and friends without other people.
We can talk more about it. See you.
Teacher Nina
The term of “big amount” will be very subjective and it is all dependent on an individual when deciding whether he/she would sacrifice a big amount of money to pay for traveling to other countries.
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I’m willing to pay some amount of money or a big amount of money to travel overseas, however, I weigh whether it’s worth spending that much money by comparing with other alternatives.
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For instance, when I plan to travel to Asian countries, the cap amount will be around 1,000 US dollars per person.
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If it costs more than that, I might be hesitant to make a decision.
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Each person feels the value of the money he spends differently.
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Even if for the same trip, someone will be willing to pay, while other won’t spend it.
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Even if I can afford to go on an expensive and luxury cruise trip, I wouldn’t.
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I might take a less expensive trip such as a normal group tour.
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I would seek all other options to save travel costs.
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I like to travel to other countries, but I am a bit stingy when budgeting it.
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