Would you say that raising children is easier or more difficult today than it was 20 years ago?
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Giving smartphone to a crying child really works! And that thing is saddens me.
We are actually destroying the child\'s childhood :(
I think traditional parenting is more fun and better for children.
i\'ve never raised children before so my view could be inaccurate.
>>I\'ve never raised children, so my views may not be accurate.
but i think it is much easier these days.
>>But I think it\'s a lot easier these days.
20 years ago the society was still quite patriarchial and thus nursing was considered as an obliged task for women.
>>20 years ago the society was still quite patriarchal and thus nursing was considered as an obliged task for women.
OR: Twenty years ago, the society was still patriarchal, so nursing was considered mandatory for women.
but the rise of feminism these days have raised the awareness of how parenting of both parents is important, also became demanding high qualities for men such as men who can cook and do tasks that were previously considered as womens job.
>>But the rise of feminism these days have raised the awareness of how parenting by both parents is important, also became demanding high qualities of men such as men who can cook and do tasks that were previously considered as a woman\'s job.
that was the positive part, now for the negative aspects of these days: you can just give your children a smartphone or a tablet to play with.
>>That was the positive part, now for the negative aspect: you can just give your children a smartphone or a tablet to play with.
ive seen many parents do it and it works like magic, instantly calming the child.
>>I\'ve seen many parents do it and it works like magic, instantly calming the child.
but the internet contains explicit contents that could have bad effects on little kid\'s mental development.
>>But the internet contains explicit contents that could have bad effects on little kid\'s mental development.
also internet addiction is a thing, and it comes with many side effects such as developing impulsive behaviors, not being able to focus.
>>Also, Internet addiction is a problem, and it is accompanied by many side effects such as developing impulsive behaviors and being unable to concentrate.
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