Would you take money to do something for others illegally?
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This is impressive, [이름]!
You handed in a great composition. Yes, conscience is more valuable than money, so don\'t ever exchange into other things. Ha! Ha! Keep your ideas flowing. See you! ^^
Ciao~
~Teacher Eunice
When I was young, I once stole things from a supermarket, my parents were very angry that day.
>>> When I was young, I once stole things from the supermarket, my parents were very angry that day.
Since it happened my parents always said to me that I must be a honest people.
>>> Since it happened my parents always said to me that I must be an honest people.
Taking money for illegally is very easy way to earn money, but I think my conscience is more valuable.
>>> Taking money illegally is very easy way to earn money, but I think my conscience is more valuable.
Thanks for todays lesson. see you tomorrow. :)
>>> Thanks for todays lesson, see you tomorrow! :)
have a nice day!
>>> Have a nice day!
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