Would You Want to Be Home-Schooled? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
In my opinion, the expereience is the best way to learn anything -means everything- of 'Life'. That's why I always hurted, crashed, and teared in my life even if I know that it would be happend. I also know that 'The mother is always right' is real. But I always ignore it and directly face my life. Although it's painful, I usually learn something from that pain. Because of such a reason, I don't want to be home-schooled. I think going out and do anything,everything is my method of developing myself.
강사 첨삭
Alice, nice to have you sending these writings. It will be a good way to keep yourself occupied and get over whatever struggles you are going through. Keep it up dear! Stay pretty and happy!
~T. IRENE~
In my opinion, the expereience is the best way to learn anything -means everything- of \'Life\'.
>> In my opinion, the experience is the best way to learn anything -I mean everything- about \'Life\'.
That\'s why I always hurted, crashed, and teared in my life even if I know that it would be happend.
>> That\'s why I always get hurt, crashed, and torn in my life even when I expected it to happen.
I also know that \'The mother is always right\' is real.
>> I also know that the saying \'The mother is always right\' is real.
But I always ignore it and directly face my life.
>> But I always ignore it and independently face my own life.
Although it\'s painful, I usually learn something from that pain.
>> Correct.
Because of such a reason, I don\'t want to be home-schooled.
>> Because of such reason, I don\'t want to be home-schooled.
I think going out and do anything,everything is my method of developing myself.
>> I think going out and doing anything or everything is my method of developing myself.
~T. IRENE~
In my opinion, the expereience is the best way to learn anything -means everything- of \'Life\'.
>> In my opinion, the experience is the best way to learn anything -I mean everything- about \'Life\'.
That\'s why I always hurted, crashed, and teared in my life even if I know that it would be happend.
>> That\'s why I always get hurt, crashed, and torn in my life even when I expected it to happen.
I also know that \'The mother is always right\' is real.
>> I also know that the saying \'The mother is always right\' is real.
But I always ignore it and directly face my life.
>> But I always ignore it and independently face my own life.
Although it\'s painful, I usually learn something from that pain.
>> Correct.
Because of such a reason, I don\'t want to be home-schooled.
>> Because of such reason, I don\'t want to be home-schooled.
I think going out and do anything,everything is my method of developing myself.
>> I think going out and doing anything or everything is my method of developing myself.
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