Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, I\'m [이름]. Today, I will introduce my favorite K-Pop group!!
I and My friends like Idol.
I like The Group \'æspa\'.
It is gril group.
æspa\'s member are four girls.
1.Karina.(Korean)
2.Winter.(korean)
3.Ning Ning.(Chinese)
4. Giselle.(Japenese)
æspa got the Main prize from the \'31th High_one SEOUL SONG PRIZE FESTIVAL\'.
I love them.
I will collect her photo card~~ bye bye~~
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! How nice to hear about your favorite K-pop group. Thanks for telling a lot of good things about them. Take care and see you soon!
~T. Annie
Hello, I\'m [이름].
>>Correct!
Today, I will introduce my favorite K-Pop group!!
>>Today, I will tell you about my favorite K-pop group!
My friends and I like idol.
>> My friends and I like K-pop groups
I like The Group \'æspa\'.
>>I like the K-pop group aespa.
It is gril group.
>> It is a girl group.
æspa\'s member are four girls.
>>Aespa\'s members are four girls.
1.Karina.(Korean)
2.Winter.(korean)
3.Ning Ning.(Chinese)
4. Giselle.(Japenese)
1.Karina.(Korean)
2.Winter.(korean)
3.Ning Ning.(Chinese)
4. Giselle.(Japenese)
>>The first and second members are Karina and Winter, who are both Koreans. The third one is Ning Ning who is Chinese, and Giselle the fourth one, is Japanese.
æspa got the Main prize from the \'31th High_one SEOUL SONG PRIZE FESTIVAL\'.
æspa got the Main prize from the \'31th High_one SEOUL SONG PRIZE FESTIVAL\'.
>>Aespa got the best award from the 31st High1 Seoul Music Awards.
I love them.
>>Correct!
I will collect her photo card~~ bye bye~~
I will collect her photo card~~ bye bye~~
>>I will collect their photo cards. Bye bye!
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