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2012-07-04 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Hi, Cam! Tomorrow I'll go to Seoul for attending to broadcasting as viewer. XD And I'll go to see a concert which also be hosted by broadcast on saturday. Maybe you would know this concert called "I'm singer"< = 나는 가수다.> My heart is shaken very much by expectancy about meeting friends and attending these amazing things. Anyway! even if I'll be in the train tomorrow, surely I'll attend our class! 'o'!!

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Hi my dear [이름], That is a very good plan you have for tomorrow I hope you will enjoy that..:) And I also want to say thank you in advance for I know that you will be attending our class tomorrow though you will be taking the train. Take care my dear [이름] and talk to you again tomorrow.. xoxoTeacher Cam^^ Hi, Cam!Tomorrow I\'ll go to Seoul for attending to broadcasting as viewer. XD >>Tomorrow I\'ll go to Seoul to watch a Broadcast. >>you can also use AUDIENCE instead of VIEWER.And I\'ll go to see a concert which also be hosted by broadcast on saturday. >>And I\'ll go to watch a concert which is also hosted by the broadcasting company on Saturday.Maybe you would know this concert called \"I\'m singer\"< = 나는 가수다.>>>correctMy heart is shaken very much by expectancy about meeting friends and attending these amazing things.>>My heart is too much shaken for I will be expecting to meet my friends and attending these amazing things.Anyway! even if I\'ll be in the train tomorrow, surely I\'ll attend our class! \'o\'!! >>correct

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